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Toms' Mirror shades reflected a slightly pinker sunset than the one the wind seemed determined to prevent Katy from sketching. What she had managed so far looked anyway more like a sunrise to Tom, and he had said so, conceding half heartedly, that 'It is more optimistic, I suppose.'
' But wait a minute Thomas, my old partner in nothing, How can you possibly tell the difference anyway?' Going by his eyes as he removed his shades, you'd think it was under a grey sunset that Tom said:'Sweetheart, I've no idea, you're the one subtly conveying it with your pastels.'

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    Drew Martyn over 1 year ago

    Excellent characterisation, you've really caught the moment and the relationship well in this one :)

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    Christopher over 1 year ago

    I agree with Drew.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Ditto the others!

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    Jamie Clapperton over 1 year ago

    Thanks very much guys. :-)))

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