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Suddenly Leanne felt cold, as she walked through the empty halls of the Cecil hotel. Noises that she swears are whispers fill her head, she couldn't work out whether or not they were in her head. An elevator door opens infront of her, she hurries towards it, hoping for human contact. Leanne peers inside, nobody's there. The whispers get louder. Leanne pushes the button to her floor, the elevator stands still, she tries every button but again, the elevator doesn't budge. Suddenly she hears girls. ''We seee you''

The doors slam shut, her screams are heard all around the hotel.

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    Ricky Moore almost 10 years ago

    This one is inspired by a true story i read a little while ago, about a 21 year old woman called Elisa Lam, look it up if you have time there is quite a creepy video of her last moments on the net.

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    Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago

    I wasn't aware of that story, very creepy indeed.

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