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Passing through the town i grew up in i decided to check out our old hang out, 'The House Commandeer Cafeteria'. To my shock i find my old best mate, John, standing outside. We get chatting and he invites me back to his for a beer, we walk there as it's only around the corner.

We get there and he tells me we need to go around the back because he needs to show me something. To my horror i see a body, Johns body, lying there.

''He's still in the house, you have to save my family'' he says.

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    Jason Mott over 6 years ago

    I like the feeling that this story creates. Well done.

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    Ricky Moore over 6 years ago


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