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There he is. There is the man who has my daughter. The police don't know it, but i know for a fact that that's him, just sitting there with his poker buddies, in his fancy top of the range kitchen. I slowly climb out the bush and creep towards the garage, climbing through the window as i get there. I look around but nothing, no sign. Hearing footsteps i hide behind some boxes. I realize its him as soon as i hear his cough, the same cough he had back when I killed his daughter, but that was only business.

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    Frenchie about 10 years ago

    Oh I love it when you are all so wicked and twisted... :)

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    Ricky Moore about 10 years ago

    There's plenty more where that came from ;) haha

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    Bryan Thomas about 10 years ago

    Ooh, nice twist.

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    Ricky Moore about 10 years ago

    Thanks mate!

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    Pearl (Bea) about 10 years ago

    Just twisted!...but enjoyable...

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    Ricky Moore about 10 years ago

    Glad you liked it!

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