The waves come crashing over the boat, making the deck slick with water. A sea creature dives under the boat, threatening to flip it. The captain of the ship steers left and right, determined to keep the boat upright. Up ahead another ship is in sight, getting closer and closer by the second. Screams from the distance reveal another ship capsizing, the crew members going down with it. A loud gurgling noise comes from beneath the angry sea. A swirling starts, throwing the ship around in a circle. Finally, all the water goes down the drain, bath time is over.
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
Wonderful. Tension builds right up until the plug's pulled. Brill! X
Michael Cook over 7 years ago
Fantastic!
D.M. over 7 years ago
The twist at the end is what all good drabbles aim for. 'Looking forward to reading more.
Brooke over 7 years ago
Thank you!!
Neville Hunt over 7 years ago
I love it! You had me fooled right until the very end, Brooke. Perfect for a drabble.
Michael D. Brooks over 7 years ago
Love the twist at the end.