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He is an abomination.

@16 he writes "I am alien to the concept of intimacy. So is everyone in this planet."

Watching a cancer patient, he writes "Life : it's a losing battle once that question pops up. What am i fighting for?"

@23 he writes "Free will is an illusion... Organic robots... Observing... Mating... Again and again..

Good News : you are immortal
Bad News : you are an immortal robot"

@40 he gets run over by a truck. Facing the sky extends his middle finger. Michelangelo's Creation of Adam comes to mind.

He dies with a proud smile.

8 comments add one below

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    Welcome to drablr.com, suriya. Looking forward to following your drabbles.

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    Suriya over 9 years ago

    thank you @HorrorShow... I love this site... waiting for more of your drabbles...

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    Richard Charles Davidson over 9 years ago

    What are we fighting for, indeed? Engaging drabble!

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    Suriya over 9 years ago

    @Drew : thanks Drew... means a lot!

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    Suriya over 9 years ago

    thanks for the comment @Richard...

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    Jim M over 9 years ago

    This is wonderful, very decisive and leaves me feeling lonely- a very powerful piece

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    Selvakumar over 9 years ago

    Free will is an illusion...

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    Suriya over 9 years ago

    thanks Jim, Selvakumar :)

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