I couldn’t believe I’d been so careless. She stood there her face frozen in a rictus of perfect horror as she saw the mess I’d created. I hadn’t meant to of course, I’d been a little too enthusiastic in my investigations.
What can I say? When I start on a puzzle I’ll do whatever it takes to solve it. And this really was a tricky conundrum.
“My God, what have you done?”
“Looking for what you saw.”
“What do you mean?”
“You said she had the most beautiful soul, but I looked everywhere in her and I couldn’t find it.”
Bryan Thomas about 10 years ago
Nice one, Michael.
Pearl (Bea) about 10 years ago
Oh, my...
Kathy about 10 years ago
Everything that pulls me in! Prime insanity! lol!
Helen Laycock about 10 years ago
A great twist! Love it!